Caswallon
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Für die Solaufein-Übersetzung brauche ich wieder mal poetische Hilfe; ich bin derzeit kreativ wohl nicht so toll drauf...
Vorschläge jeder Art sind willkommen - das ganze Gedicht, oder auch nur einzelne Strophen.
Setting: Solaufein ist von Bodhi in einen Vampir verwandelt worden und trägt folgendes Gedicht vor:
Favour my solemn song, for I have loved
Thee ever, and thee only; I have watched
Thy shadow, and the darkness of thy steps,
And my heart ever gazes on the depths
Of thy deep mysteries. I have made my bed
In charnels and on coffins, where black death
Keeps record of the trophies won from thee,
Hoping to still these obstinate questionings
Of thee and thine, by forcing some lone ghost
Thy messenger, to render up the tale
Of what we are. In lone and silent hours,
When night makes a weird sound of its own stillness,
Like an inspired and desperate alchymist
Stalking his very life on some dark hope,
Have I mixed awful talk and asking looks
With my most innocent love, until strange tears
Uniting with those breathless kiss, made
Such magic as compels the charmèd night
To render up thy charge ...
So, viel Spaß, und schon mal vielen Dank.
Cas
Vorschläge jeder Art sind willkommen - das ganze Gedicht, oder auch nur einzelne Strophen.
Setting: Solaufein ist von Bodhi in einen Vampir verwandelt worden und trägt folgendes Gedicht vor:
Favour my solemn song, for I have loved
Thee ever, and thee only; I have watched
Thy shadow, and the darkness of thy steps,
And my heart ever gazes on the depths
Of thy deep mysteries. I have made my bed
In charnels and on coffins, where black death
Keeps record of the trophies won from thee,
Hoping to still these obstinate questionings
Of thee and thine, by forcing some lone ghost
Thy messenger, to render up the tale
Of what we are. In lone and silent hours,
When night makes a weird sound of its own stillness,
Like an inspired and desperate alchymist
Stalking his very life on some dark hope,
Have I mixed awful talk and asking looks
With my most innocent love, until strange tears
Uniting with those breathless kiss, made
Such magic as compels the charmèd night
To render up thy charge ...
So, viel Spaß, und schon mal vielen Dank.
Cas